January 6, 2014
Prompt #2: Look at any sentence you are writing right now. Cut at least five words while keeping the essence of the message. Now go back and use another five words to add something that will surprise your readers.
Open the flap
and you will see Henry hiding behind a hurricane lantern with a candlestick flickering a bright light.
Open the flap to see Henry hiding behind a flickering candlestick inside a hurricane lantern.